You’ve seen some examples of feedback on student work - now, it’s
your turn! Imagine you asked to provide feedback on the following piece
of work:
Now, drag and drop some feedback! Once you are happy with your
creation, take a screenshot of the third column and submit it to this
link: X.
Drag options from the first two columns into the third and craft some feedback!
First of all, drag at least one from here...
Nice work.
I really appreciate how you gave a fun example.
I like how you layed out your poster in clear sections using boxes.
I liked your title.
Your content is accurate.
I noticed you used blue to highlight key words and focus the readers' attention
...and at least one from here!
Your colours are plain and boring.
There's too much information, too much to read.
The text is too small.
I like your use of blue but also wonder if other colours would help draw the audience's attention?
I appreciate all of the knowledge you have shared but feel a more directed focus would have portrayed your point more impactfully.
I wonder if you could have focused on your activity and reduced the written content as I feel the activity is a real strength of your poster.
None.
Randomness isn't an issue and you should have picked a better topic.
Have you actually proofread your poster? Error check!
I totally get you have a lot to say and I can see you are really passionate about this topic, but as someone new to these ideas, the wealth of information is a little overwhelming. Have you considered including a link to more information?
Have a go! Create your feedback here: